this one i wrote long back..posting now
just tried my hands on punjabi poetry :)
Mere vichon shabd ne kirde
Menu dhoka de ke ne chirde
Te mai kuch kr v na sakde
Eh khedda da mul
Kade pura na hoya kul
Aap hi khedke har jande
Ghar val mod is dubdi kashti nu
Haje vi der nai hoyi mukan nu
Apni buland awaaz utha k das
Apni kashti nu tu aap kas
Haule haule girna..
Haule haule kirna...
Eh akhan jo menu jandian
Pichhe na mur eho das rhian
Mita dinda hai ehsaas menu
Te rang dinda hai kala menu
Ke bahut gujrian ne tere te
Tu larian bahut hain apne te
Hun sama hai tere jittan da....
Ghar val mod is dubdi kashti nu
Haje vi der nai hoyi mukan nu
Apni buland awaaz utha k das
Tu apni kashti nu aap kas
Haule haule girna..
Haule haule kirna...
Gunguna sang mere
Mai v gau naal tere
P.S. Feel free 2 bug me if u dont understand
Sorry, i was trying 2 b nice...
i was kidding
current mood(in the poem) : motivated
So what's the final decision.. Can I bug or not ? :confused:
ReplyDeletebtw to the extent I understood it, it is amazingly superb :)
thank you,klorik
ReplyDeleteMere vichon shabd ne kirde
ReplyDeleteMeri roohe vasde kinne chirde
Te mai kuch kr v na sakdi
Pal pal raha mai dardi
Eh kidda da mul?
Kade pura na hoya kul.
Tasveer bas ik Tasveer da sahara
Rah takdeyan sama lang challea sara...
Sama Lang challea sara...
Sama Lang challea sara...
dil khush kar ditta...pelli vaari punjaabi di poem suni hai...
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